Question : Correction of texts II

Hi everybody,

        I have written some texts in English, and as I am not an Expert in this, please may I receive your help. I would like to have them in both version if possible, American and British English.  
Thanks a lot!

Text -   WALKING AROUND

Most of people live in big cities while others live in small ones. Lifestyle may change from place to place, but one thing everybody has together: The eternal search for a better quality of life.
Especially in big cities like New York, London, Paris, Tokyo as in many others people usually have better conveniences like health assistance, dwelling, transport, food and so on. But, the cost for all this can be high.
We can see in the streets lots of cars in line with their drivers getting stressed and impatient with the traffic, extreme noise and pollution all around. Things that passers-by can easily notice as well.
In special occasions great crowds go out for refreshing themselves. Many people like drinking beer, others prefer have a juice, mineral water or simply eat light food.
People go and back from their work, some take advantage to go shopping, while others prefer going to a park looking for pure air or just walk around at the boulevards or squares. Those who live by the sea like appreciating the breeze. There are also those who enjoy staying at home watching TV or talking to their family and friends.
Today most of people enjoy modern life, new technologies, fashion and find new places to explore and feel good at them. For example when someone goes downtown, he or she has the opportunity to walk by malls, museums, theaters, beautiful avenues or parks and meet other people from different parts of the city. He or she may also witness curious scenes, and when some of them sometimes can look awful and aggressive in time of crescent worldwide violence. So, people should avoid going to places which can be susceptible to this kind of situation.
Going out for a walking is always a good action and it makes people stressless, besides offering opportunities for a bigger sociability, update contacts and get other impressions on the place you live in. So, take some time and interact with your city and neighbors. Enjoy life and seize the best of each moment you may have!

Answer : Correction of texts II

Most people live in big cities while others live in small ones. Lifestyle may change from place to place, but one thing everybody has in common: The eternal search for a better quality of life.

[The first sentence is a bit trivial, along the lines of "Most rats are bit, while the others are small".]

Especially in the big cities like New York, London, Paris, and Tokyo, people usually have better access to health, housing, transport, food and so on. But the cost for this can be high.

In the streets traffic jams, extreme noise and pollution cause drivers to be stressed and get impatient. Things that easily effect passers-by as well.

On special occasions great crowds go out for refreshing themselves. Many people like drinking beer, others prefer have a juice, mineral water or simply eat light food.

[What are you trying to say here? That crows assemble in the parks?]

When people go home from their work, some take advantage to go shopping, while others prefer going to the park looking for pure air or just walking around the boulevards or squares. Those who live by the sea like appreciating the breeze. There are also those who enjoy staying at home watching TV or talking to their family and friends.

Today most of people enjoy modern life, new technologies, fashion and find new places to explore and feel good at them. For example when someone goes downtown, he or she has the opportunity to walk through malls, museums, theaters, beautiful avenues or parks and meet other people from different neighbourhoods of the city.

He or she may also witness curious scenes, and when some of them sometimes can look awful and aggressive in time of crescent worldwide violence. So, people should avoid going to places which can be susceptible to this kind of situation.

[I have no idea what this means?]

Going out walking is always a good action as it removes stress, besides offering opportunities for a social encounter, renew contacts or get to know other parts of the place you live. So, take some time and interact with your city and neighbours. Enjoy life and seize the best oppertunity you may have!

[neighbor = American; neighbour = British]

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